One day I was in my paddock and the feeding my fat pig but the ferocious wind was so strong I couldn't get back to the house. So I had to get in the pig shelter with my pig it stunk. I was in there for ages nearly 1 and a half days. Luckily I had a bag of chips and an apple. It was so cold I was wearing a jacket and I was still cold. In the paddock a few trees fell down after that day I went back to the house and told everyone all about it.
Ha, this made me smile Logan. I like how you were specific with what you had/ate and how you were feeling. Great work! How can we put in different punctuation? :)
ReplyDeleteLogan. Hello from the UK. Well London England. Are you following the cricket? I am. A very exciting day yesterday. New Zealand are a very strong side. I like your post. It is very funny. How did you stop the big fat pig from stealing your chips and apple? Do you live in the countryside. The children at my school don't get to see many animals so they don't often write about them. One little point. I think you could break up the last sentence with some punctuation. It would make the meaning clearer. Do you agree?
ReplyDeleteBest wishes. Mr Paine
Thank you for your feed back. I will take it on board.
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